Assalamualaikum...hey...today is Tuesday right??no more acting today..Miss Zu just go on with group presentation about introductory paragraph that we learn with the pass classes..O.M.G!!my group be the 1st group to present that.So we come infront and present..we present about personal example..After that,Miss Zu give the supporters comment..She says that personal example we cannot mention about our feeling toward the topic.just give the advice and the experience.Provides strong, dramatic incidents to use. Honesty in expressing thoughts and feelings will ring true with the reader. While you can make up the personal experience, be careful that it sounds credible.
Personal observation - different from a personal example, an observation is something you saw happening..so we have do a major correction..It's so tired..But we learn something...Then now we in the recovery..So...Wait...bye...
Example..On Friday, February 19, 2000, life changed for an eighteen-year-old young man. He became very ill from a bacterial infection. His body could not fight the infection. Why? After a week of tests and examinations by several specialists, the diagnosis was made. He had leukemia, a cancer of the bone marrow. I am that young man. When a person finds out that he has cancer, just as I did, his whole world changes. A cancer patient is affected physically, psychologically, and socially by the impact of cancer.
Example..On Friday, February 19, 2000, life changed for an eighteen-year-old young man. He became very ill from a bacterial infection. His body could not fight the infection. Why? After a week of tests and examinations by several specialists, the diagnosis was made. He had leukemia, a cancer of the bone marrow. I am that young man. When a person finds out that he has cancer, just as I did, his whole world changes. A cancer patient is affected physically, psychologically, and socially by the impact of cancer.
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